“The Patriot”

Lazaro, Perez

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Authors note: I think the author wanted to say was that if we don’t feel that something is right that we should fight for it but not like as war but may be a debate.

           

In this story there is a war going on and there is they boy. Named Gabriel we have a great fighter. “Reader there is going to be many great facts.” In this story there will be action and sadness.

            Named Gabriel martin he was a brave shoulder that went into the war. He was a great shoulder until he was injured and then he found his way home and then he was healed and many others were as well. But the read coats found him and the others and they killed them but the boy and said they were going to hang him. Then Gabriel’s Brother Thomas martin but when he did that the British colonel-colonel William tavington killed poor old Thomas martin.

             Then when they little boy died, then the father was very angry so he got his two other sons and told them to shoot all the red coats he could see so they did and they took out 15-20 red coats. Then after that they started their own group called the militia.  So they started to get men to fight and they got plenty of men for a war and them fought and fought till they got ambushed by the red coats. After that happened they laded low and they had a plan to get there men back and they out smarted the red coats and they got them men back. They trap was good because they weren’t really red coats it was the uniforms and then stuffed with straw.

            Then after they got there men back and they started to think of a way to win this war and they rushed and charged to the battle field.  Then they were all lined up ready for formation and they went first and they strike and the retreated so there other men could finish them off. But they retreaded and then the father Benjamin martin killed the man, William tavington and he died by the hand of the father. Then they went on to win the war and finish the red coats and they surrender and they won the war. They also had a friend to help them the French and they rocked that war out and they were successful to win the war.

 “Reader there is going to be many great facts.” In this story there was a great story behind it and the militia won the war with honor and faith in their team.